Well done. This degree of lyrical description usually comes off as stuffy or overwrought. Your writing feels confident and beautiful. I really like how you don't just spell everything out. This story requires a little work on the reader's part, which is rewarded handsomely, even if horrifically. I'll be looking for more from you•
Well done. This degree of lyrical description usually comes off as stuffy or overwrought. Your writing feels confident and beautiful. I really like how you don't just spell everything out. This story requires a little work on the reader's part, which is rewarded handsomely, even if horrifically. I'll be looking for more from you•
Thank you• I'm always trying to balance clarity with leaving a little room for the reader to co-create the world of the story.